Category Archives: Stories
Progress
Posted by Alan Edwards
I’ve decided to stop posting excerpts of my NaNoWriMo novel while it’s being written. I’d rather give the readers (both of them) the opportunity to read the whole thing at their own pace. This way, any alterations with the previously posted material won’t cause confusion (yes, despite my attempts to hold down my Inner Editor, I occasionally let him free to zip around, especially when he thinks of a detail that may be pertinent and belongs in an earlier section). So, for the person reading the excerpts, I hope you aren’t disappointed that you’ll have to wait about 22 more days to read it.
Novel Excerpt, 11/5
Posted by Alan Edwards
The door leading from the kitchen swung open, and the round form of Domic pushed into the area behind the bar bearing a plain square wooden chest. The dark wood and dull metal trim made the container easily forgettable, but the detailed instructions for its care delivered to Tevas by the innkeeper’s agent let the merchant know that it contained something more than just clothing and oddments. The strain on Domic’s face as he struggled to place it atop the bar bore evidence to the weight of the mysterious contents.
Novel Excerpt, 11/4
Posted by Alan Edwards
He heard the laborer grunt in response, but he did not move as directed. After a long pause, the man in the work-stained tunic finally spoke. “You’re talking to the innkeeper.” Tevas’ eyes shifted down to fix his gaze on the man once more as he leaned back against the bar he’d lately been working on. Arms folded, eyes hooded, and mouth in a half-smirk, the innkeeper said, “You’ll be paid when the goods are here and inspected. Anything I don’t like you can haul back to your wagon.”
Novel Excerpt, 11/3
Posted by Alan Edwards
The merchant’s arrival caused less of a stir than he’d imagined. The town over the past week had gotten used to the carts and wagons from Brethford, so Tevas did not get the novelty of being the first visitor to the town after the snows cleared. His carriage did seem to impress some of the residents, however, as Tevas noticed several of them looking at its magnificence and talking in low tones to one another as he looked out the carriage windows. He willed the sickness in his belly to be still as the carriage swayed up the final rise to the Silver Bear.
Novel Excerpt, 11/2
Posted by Alan Edwards
This is a continuation of the excerpts I’ve written before. Between them is an unwritten bridge scene where the stranger buys the inn in the town of Daleswall, causing quite a stir. This proceeds from that event, and is what I am doing for NaNoWriMo. Since I won’t get much opportunity to write anything else this month, I will post the story here as it progresses. It’ll be ugly at times, but I hope it doesn’t actively make you vomit.
A week had passed since the stranger bought the Silver Bear Inn so dramatically, surrounded by the majority of the small town of Daleswall. The common room was more active than usual since that night, with small numbers of folk present during all hours of the day. Claiming anything to the contrary, they were there because curiosity and the thirst for gossip demanded it. Careful eyes watched the stranger as he moved around the inn, his dog forever at his heels, repairing accumulated years of damage and rot. Carts and wagons appeared during the week from Brethford to the south, bearing large amounts of lumber and lacquers and other assorted materials. During the day, the stranger worked on the interior of the inn, moving outside during the last hour or two of dying sunlight to patch the holes in the roof. More knots of casual watchers kept an eye on him then as well, under the guise of early evening strolls and impromptu visits. Read the rest of this entry →
Chapter 1 of TStbNL, Part 3
Posted by Alan Edwards
The silence was broken with the crash of wood on wood. Old Jordin bustled into the room, followed closely by Laecima. The door battered against its jamb on its return trajectory, but the sound was overshadowed by the raised voice of the elderly innkeeper. “It was right there!” he shouted, pointing to an empty table in front of the remnants of the bar. “I didn’t move it. Kiki didn’t move it. It certainly didn’t move itself. So I want to know, where did you put it?” Jordin paused with his hand extended towards the offending table, no longer stabbing the air with every other word.
Chapter 1 of TStbNL, Part 2
Posted by Alan Edwards
Comrick Long-traveled had pushed away from the table and laced his fingers over his round stomach minutes before the stranger pushed the inn door open. This spared him the indignity of spilling stew down his chin and into his beard, unlike the three other men sharing his table. True, Brother Derle was half-spared, but that was only due to the lack of a beard. The sight of his friends’ sudden sodden jaws made a kind smile easy to conjure to his apple-cheeked face. “Welcome, stranger! Come, make yourself comfortable and enjoy the fine food and hospitality of the Silver Bear!” Comrick spread both hands expansively around him, as if he were conjuring the rest of the large but mostly empty common area around him.
Chapter 1 to TStbNL, Part I
Posted by Alan Edwards
The stranger appeared on the edge of town just after sunset. Mud from the last of the snowmelt clung to his worn boots as he left the skeletal trees that hewed close to the track outside of the small settlement. A dog of indeterminate breed stayed close to him, nose in the dirt or high in the air, sampling every scent to be found. Occasionally the animal stopped, ears pricked and eyes roving, before catching up the man once more. On those occasions the man’s steps would slow, as if waiting for confirmation from the dog that it was safe to proceed. They moved carefully, although whether it was from the possibly treacherous mud or another reason wasn’t clear. Read the rest of this entry →
Prologue to the Story to be Named Later, XII and Final
Posted by Alan Edwards
A lifelong study of contagion and disease had germinated the idea. If the ravenous unsleeping guardians could somehow spread their condition to their victims, then Troius would have the unstoppable army he needed to bend the world to his will. An army that didn’t need supply wagons or camp followers, that found their provender when they met their enemies, that grew with every enemy that fell – this was the tide that would sweep the empires and petty kingdoms of the world under his control. The mighty would grovel on their knees before him for protection against the Army of Troius. He finally achieved success, shortly after earning the trust of El Sof’s king and the hand of his daughter, keeping his work from the prying eyes of the king’s pet sorcerers. At least, until the experiment required its first test subjects. Read the rest of this entry →
Prologue to the Story to be Named Later, XI
Posted by Alan Edwards
The massive chamber stretched ahead of him, dark as the Void until the wizard illuminated it with a wave of his hand. The three-score figures scattered around the chamber in various postures – some standing, others sitting or sprawled completely onto the floor – began to stir shortly after. A deep sepulchral moan began to echo in the chamber as the first of the figures saw the massive robed figure in the doorway. In moments the entire chamber writhed with the semblance of life as the noisome things that lived there moved eagerly to the door as if to greet their benefactor. Read the rest of this entry →